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A pain
Author: - Sumit Ojha
A Pain
In my heart
A pain
Is my life
A Pain
See my eyes
A pain
Rise after workout
A pain
Become behind brake-up
A pain
Feel my mind
A pain
In Smile
A pain
In love
A pain
Intended for lovers
A pain
In hungry
A pain
In angry
A pain
For all
A pain
I contain
A pain
For me
A pain
Hurt me
Now
I want to give you
A pain
N desire for
Something
With a pain
I want to
Suck
Swallow
Drink
You blood
With a pain
N I want to give you a mark
A mark of love
A mark on your neck
A mark created
By my sharp teethes
With a pain
And
This mark offer People
Make able to notice
How much I contain
A pain
For blood
Sumit
rating: 9.00

ADD COMMENT:
| .: Add date: July 28, 2007 |
.: Score: 5 |
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Nothing good inside your poems... Dude your are a person of darkness...
Submitted by DL
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| .: Add date: July 28, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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`A Pain' is nice poetry. I don't know enough about vampires but I think that you are not just a human... Maybe you are a vampire!
Submitted by Mary
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| .: Add date: August 8, 2007 |
.: Score: 9 |
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sounds like a vampire want to kill someone...
Submitted by John Doerr
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| .: Add date: August 9, 2007 |
.: Score: 5 |
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What can I say. I'm speechless. I like the inside and the outside of this poem. And I read your poem with my tear in my eyes, You really touch my heart. God bless you!
Ps. but you break my heart because you wrote poems only for vampires... :(
Submitted by Connie
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| .: Add date: August 9, 2007 |
.: Score: 9 |
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I feel the same way. Very well written. I feel your pain.
Submitted by Stephanie
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| .: Add date: August 10, 2007 |
.: Score: 9 |
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This poem brought tears to my eyes. i love it and never give up your special gift of writing poems.
Submitted by Joe
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| .: Add date: August 10, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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omg! i love your poem it really touched my heart and if it touched one heart it will touch anyones heart. omg keep writting poems! hey, I also love test of blood. I give it an 10 out of 10
Submitted by ashley
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| .: Add date: August 11, 2007 |
.: Score: 9 |
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really painful...
Submitted by JN
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| .: Add date: August 14, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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this is a good poem
Submitted by Kristin
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| .: Add date: August 18, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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why you are fascination for vampires?
Submitted by anonymous
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| .: Add date: August 29, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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GOOD!
Submitted by John
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| .: Add date: September 5, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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you are a great writer beacuse this poem was cool
Submitted by Sarah
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| .: Add date: September 7, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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I feel where you are when you wrote this poem
Submitted by krish
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| .: Add date: December 18, 2007 |
.: Score: 10 |
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So u want to bite me
Submitted by anonymous
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